Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, September 11, 2020
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Hello Ella, My name is Honey from Marshland School! I love your video!!!!
ReplyDeleteIts so cool first she breaks into a mansion then at the end she gets EXECUTED!!! I mean a turn of events....I loved how you explained the story as It went along and If she ever arises from the dead I will know what she looks like :D. Next time you could add more description or even add pictures into the video so its lures in more watchers and keeps them entertained. This reminded me of the actual Goldilocks story! Well done and keep up the good work- Honey.