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Friday, September 11, 2020

GOLDEN GIRL IS WANTED!!


 

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  1. Hello Ella, My name is Honey from Marshland School! I love your video!!!!
    Its so cool first she breaks into a mansion then at the end she gets EXECUTED!!! I mean a turn of events....I loved how you explained the story as It went along and If she ever arises from the dead I will know what she looks like :D. Next time you could add more description or even add pictures into the video so its lures in more watchers and keeps them entertained. This reminded me of the actual Goldilocks story! Well done and keep up the good work- Honey.

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